Here is a sneak peek of some of the writing that has been happening in Room 3 lately (pop into class to view the full stories)...
The
butterfly finally came out of their chrysalis. It flew clumsily around
the classroom.
By Kaden
Sam had a turn at looking at the butterflies.
They were Ninja, Steve, Stripes, Molly and Rosie. We love our butterflies.
By Anouk
When the butterflies came out the wings were
crinkly and it stayed still for a very long time.
By Stephanie
Wow. Today the last butterfly hatched. I was the
first one to see it. When it first hatched it’s wings were crinkled and
crumpled.
By Sam
I missed the butterfly hatching this morning. I
missed it and Sam saw them.
By Felix
The butterflies were flying clumsily. I wanted
to have a touch of it. I didn’t want it to go to it’s new home.
By Saydee
Today when I got to school Olivia told me that
the last butterfly had hatched. It was crinkly, wrinkly, crinkled and wet. The
other one that had hatched yesterday fluttered clumsily around the classroom.
By Brianah
Woohoo! Three of our chrysalises have hatched
but where are they? I must find them.
By Hannah
We did butterfly everything, it was fun, fun,
fun! It was Tuesday, the next day, that Room 3 had one more. It had crinkled
wings and they were delicate.
By Hunter
Do you know how you know if it is a girl or a
boy? I think you tell by checking its name tag! No, don’t be silly! You see if
it’s got a spot on its wings. A girl butterfly has no spots.
By Georgia
I found a butterfly in the art bay. It is
colourful and black.
By Koen
Whoopee! We had to find the butterflies. It was
a mystery. There was one on the caterpillars and one in the art bay. The wait
was over.
By Josh
The butterflies cracked open because they were
ready. Come and watch, they were drying their skin and wings.
by Summer
On Monday I knew our butterflies were going to
come out when I was at school. I was right, 3 butterflies came out of their
chrysalises. 2 more need to come out and one is black . The children screamed
that 3 butterflies come out.
By Katia
Woohoo! It’s finally over. Now it was cool when
the butterflies went clumsily around the classroom and one of them was riding
one of the caterpillars we made and it was funny.
By George
“Woohoo! Look Miss McKenzie, one butterfly has
hatched!”
We were amazed. It slowly
came out. We know if it is a boy or girl if it has got a dot in the middle of
its wing. If it is a girl it will have no dots. It has some wet, crumpled,
delicate wings.
By Isabelle
Whoopie! It was exciting, it was butterfly day
yesterday and it hatched this morning. It’s wings were all crinkly when it came
out. After lunch we got to hold it. Georgia got the freaks when it climbed up
to her hair.
By Kazia
This butterfly was flying. The wings were
coloured wings. I liked the wings too. It opened today and it was fun to see.
By Ethan
It was a clumsy butterfly but it looked awesome.
Some people got butterflies on their head and hands. I will love them.
By Makayla
When we were doing maths I noticed there was one
butterfly who had hatched. We were very excited. We saw it fluttering clumsily
around the classroom. The wings were very delicate.
By Charlee
Yesterday morning at maths time, one butterfly
hatched from its chrysalis. When it finally managed to wriggle its way out it
started flying clumsily around the classroom. We knew it was a male because it
had 2 black dots.
By Tom
Great writing Room 3
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